Thank each of you for your kind and invaluable comments!! Thank you especially to Keith, Kim, Bev and Nancy whose suggestions I tried to integrate here.
I like it much better, though I see a bit of horizontality AND verticality instead of the 'invisibility' Lorraine and others suggested.
Still, those 'raw' edges of horizontal strokes that bothered me so much are about gone and the blending of the different colors seems better to me.
Again, my humblest thanks for your help, your objective eyes and your kindness ...
7 comments:
Oh, this one is close to my heart! When we lived on a farm in SA, I could pick them from the valley where they grew in abundance...I just put on my boots and picked armfuls for everywhere in the house and for friends...
Beautiful!
ronell
It's a beautiful subject and composition.
Gosh, this is beautiful!
Exsquisite!!
Perfect! Great choice for the background!
This is just beautiful! The background is perfect!
WOW! This is beautiful! WOW!
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